Saturday, July 21, 2012

White Fox--Chapter 2, Part 2


Chapter two of White Fox continues here.  In this part of the tale, I describe Renardo's appearance and introduce a new character.  Some of the decor in Renardo's home is also detailed.  For the first time, the reader gets the chance to see the protagonist's interaction with a close friend.

Sancho licked his lips and looked at his master inquisitively, hoping for more food.  Renardo patted his leg, and the dog came to him and threw his front paws upon his lap.  “How did Malvin figure out that I was onto him, boy?” he asked, petting the soft mat of fur on Sancho’s head.  “How could he know? It’s not like I’ve been running around the city, asking anyone where I can find him.  Not until Moustache Man, that is.”
The dog said nothing.  His eyes were set on his master’s face, as if he were staring into his soul.  Renardo’s vision became unclear as he tunneled into the depths of his thoughts.  “I guess how Malvin knows about me is not that important right now.  What’s important is that Doctor Wiles lied to me, and I know where he teaches.  He’s my only lead.  I have to talk to him again, and this time, I don’t think I’ll be as nice.  Wiles….Heh.  Fitting name, don’t you think?”
Sancho left his lap and proceeded to wander about the room.  Renardo went to the display case at the back of the room and fiddled with the knot that tied the white cape to his neck.  When it came loose, he opened the case, moved the curtain aside, and hung the cape up on a hook.  “I wish I could have worn the whole thing,” he said to himself.  “It just wasn’t the right time.  Soon enough, though.”  Then he returned the display case to the way it was and walked over to the mirror above Sancho’s bed.  His tousled hair, appearing dark brown in the dim lighting (though it was actually dirty blonde), stretched across his forehead in long strands.  Not far below rested eyes of blue frost, pale but lively.  His nose and mouth were not his most distinct features, but they fit well within the square frame of his head.  It had been said of him that he carried a boyish look, as his skin was light and fair, unblemished by freckle or mole; and he was always clean-shaven.  Below his head protruded broad shoulders upheld by an athletic build.  He was presently garbed in plain black dress pants, business shoes, and a sports jacket; the latter was open, exposing a white dress shirt that he wore beneath it.  The cape—which had hung between the jacket and shirt—had been tucked into his pants, but had come loose some time during his brawl with Moustache Man.
He sat again at his desk, deciding that he should book a flight to the Philadelphia International Airport while the thought was fresh in his mind.  He prepared to open a window for the internet when a loud ring stung the air and caused him to leap in his seat.  Someone was at his front door.  His heart began to race as he imagined a host of armed police officers scouring his house and property.  Or maybe it was Malvin himself; that would be far worse.  Before Sancho could bark, he waved a threatening finger in the dog’s direction and repeatedly mouthed the word, “No.”  Sancho stared at him with seeming defiance, but soon his tension from the sound eased and he returned to his bed.  Renardo clicked something on his desktop and a window popped up, taking a moment to load.  He waited.  The screen went black.  Then there was a gray fuzziness and static, and a live feed of his porch popped onto the screen.  Neither the police nor Malvin was at the door, but rather a man, who presently peered through the thin windows on either side of the front door.
The man could not see anything inside the house, so he rang the doorbell a second time.  His foot tapped impatiently on the front porch as he waited for Renardo to show himself.  A few seconds passed, and he stopped tapping so he could listen for any sounds coming from within the building.  There was silence.  Normally silence did not bother him, but in this place, hidden away from society and overwhelmed by grand trees and untamed grass, and centered around an expansive home of aged craft, it seemed to be magnified.  He rapped on the door with loud strikes and continued to wait.  The silence persisted.  Finally, he turned from the door and made his way toward the gothic gate.  The moment his foot touched the stair at the edge of the porch, he heard something slice through the wind, and then a great force bludgeoned him in the back.  He fell forward, onto the cement, but he rose quickly and whirled toward his attacker.  Renardo stood there, laughing and holding his chest.  He walked forward and gave the man a monstrous bear hug.
“What the hell, Renardo?” the man exclaimed. “Did you really just jump off your roof and tackle me?”
“Yeah, I guess I did.” Renardo had some difficulty containing his laughter.  “Did you suspect anything?”
“Of course not! If I did, you would’ve been the one on the ground!” The man began to laugh as well.
Renardo released him and grinned.  “So how are you, Nate?”
“Hey, what’d I tell you, man? I dropped ‘Nate,’ so now I’m ‘Nathan.’ It sounds more adult-like, remember?”
“Yeah, whatever.” Renardo rolled his eyes.  “Well, Nate, what brings you to the neighborhood?”
“Well, we haven’t talked or anything for the past few weeks, so I wanted to come by and see how you’re doing.  How are you doing, bud?”
Renardo craned his neck so that he could see over Nathan’s shoulder, noticing the quietness of the area for the first time.  If Malvin knew about him, he should limit his time spent in open spaces.  “We don’t have to hang out here.  Come inside! I’ll get you some coffee, and maybe something stronger, if you want it.”
“I’ll go for the coffee,” Nathan replied, following his friend up the porch.  “Not really in the mood for anything stronger.”
They entered the finely decorated living room, Renardo glancing discreetly out the window for unwanted guests as he shut the door without a sound.  Most of the living room lay to the left, filled with a massive rug, a glass coffee table, a couch, a recliner, and a plasma screen television that was greater in width than either friend was tall.  A doorway led to the kitchen on the right, and a door was located on the left of the room, blocking entrance to the other side of the house.  Facing the front door was a mocha-brown staircase that spiraled up to the second story.  Renardo motioned for Nathan to sit on the couch and disappeared into the kitchen.  His friend took a seat and looked around, shaking his head.  The aura of wealth that the living room exuded never ceased to amaze him.
“So Renardo…you didn’t answer my question,” he pointed out, admiring the colossal television.  “How the heck are ya?”
“You seem to be forgetting that I asked you first,” came the distant response from the kitchen, accompanied by the sound of running water.
“Ok, fine,” said Nathan with a laugh.  “I’m really good, man.  There’s not a whole lot going on, honestly.  I’m just busy with classes and with not having a girlfriend.”
“Trust me, I hear you there.” Renardo set the coffee pot in the coffee maker and turned it on.  “The second part, that is.”
“Yeah, I was gonna say, I don’t think you have the stress of classes anymore,” Nathan commented, “unless that was a different Renardo Blanchard who graduated with his master’s degree in engineering and a minor in kinesiology—oh, and managed to graduate magna cum laude.”
“Heh, you’re a funny guy.” The coffee maker began to growl.  Renardo came to the doorway and leaned against a wall.  “I’m glad you’re doing ok.  That’s good, man.  Really good.”
Nathan nodded, looking at him.  “So then, I assume you’re not having any luck with the ladies?”
“Yeah right.  I don’t go out enough to see if I have the luck.” He paused, his eyebrows furrowed with thought.  “Although I did meet this lady at a diner this morning.  She seemed to be a little interested in me.”
“Were you interested in her?”
The furrowed eyebrows continued.  “Hard to say.  I wasn’t paying a whole lot of attention to her.”
“Damn, man!” Nathan shouted, smacking the couch.  “That was your shot! A girl pays attention to you, and you just act like she’s not there?”
“Ok, ok,” Renardo said with a chuckle, throwing his hands in front of him as if to ward off a blow.  “I paid enough attention to see that she was a cool person.  And she was pretty.  She seemed kind of sad.  She was boring, too.”
“I don’t think you gave her much of a chance.  You should try talking to her again.”
“Maybe….” Renardo looked at the ground, his thoughts only on Malvin.  “I’ve been really busy lately, though.”
“Doing what?” Nathan asked.  “You don’t have a car, so you’re probably not traveling far from home.  You’re done with school.  You don’t have a job.  What in the world could take up so much of your time?”
“Hey,” Renardo responded, actually quite annoyed.  “Just because you’re my best friend, it doesn’t mean you know everything about my life.  There’s more going on than you know.  And you wouldn’t know what to say or do if I told you everything.”
Nathan rose to his feet and approached his friend.  He looked at him, his eyes serious.  “I’m sorry, Renardo.  I’m curious, though.  What’s going on? If I can be of any help, I’ll do what I can.”
Renardo sighed long, and his eyes met those of his friend.  “Are you sure you want to know?”
“Of course.  You’re my best friend.  Please, tell me.”
“Ok, then, but you should ready yourself,” Renardo warned him.  “It’s intense stuff.  We should probably sit down for this.”

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